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Post by SinMarai Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:46 pm



All of the art I'm really proud of eventually ends up on my deviantArt, so I think I'm mostly going to use this as a place to ask for critique on my works in progress.

I'll just post my WIPs in link form though, so as not to stretch the page.

Current works looking for some tips:
Character Headshot (Victorine) (colors)
Character Bust (Eva) (partial colors)[updated]
Character Full (Leah) (flats) [updated]



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Post by SinMarai Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:24 pm

    I'm not feeling too good about Damien's face in the first link. Any suggestions?
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Post by SinMarai Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:31 pm

    I asked for advice on Victorine's skin on DA, but I'll ask again here. Just point out what seems off for me?
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Post by Excalibur Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:57 pm

mm id say the right cheek on the face pic is a lil too low or shallow? and i think the braids should be a lil longer and the nose seems to be pointed diagonally, but the mouth is straight down (not sure if u get my meaning o_O)
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Post by SinMarai Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:23 pm

    I'm attempting to fix the cheek and hair, but I'm not really sure what you mean about the nose and mouth. Is it because the viewer's right side of the mouth is so pointed?
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Post by Syldoran Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:54 pm

I have to agree, there's something a little off about the mouth in the first one. The lips seem a little too full to fit on her face at all.
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